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Offline Bumbly

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MyWarriorCats.com Adoptables & Virtual Pets :)
« on: February 21, 2011, 07:53:02 PM »
Okay, I'm going to post my first advertisement.  ;D

MyWarriorCats.com is a virtual pet and adoptables site. We feature all kinds of creatures despite the name, from fantasy like dragons to normal and everyday pets like dogs and cats. We have tons of unique features, too, so we're worth checking out! :)

http://www.mywarriorcats.com

:) I hope to see you there. :)

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Re: MyWarriorCats.com Adoptables & Virtual Pets :)
« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2011, 09:46:46 AM »
I'm a bit confused... at first it seemed like a forum RPG, but clicking around, it seems like the site has no real direction..

Compare:

http://www.mywarriorcats.com/
http://www.mywarriorcats.com/animations.php
http://www.mywarriorcats.com/adoptables/

When someone comes to the site, they should know what they're going to do. IMO the last link should be your homepage, it's more apparent from that page that this is an actual game and not a forum-based RPG or fansite.

Overall, I know this isn't a "review my game" thread, but I think your site would greatly benefit from some consolidation efforts. Get your message across front and center. Cut the endless paragraphs of text (SEO on games isn't usually worth it anyway IMO) and work on grabbing the potential player and sucking them in.

 


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